OM: Reminiscence ~Unforgotten Innocence~

[teraslasch]

Hi guys , i'm back with a new song . This song is written for my next album. The version of the song that i have here, is a demo version consisting of rough piano arrangement + the main melodies played by flute n violin samples. For the real actual version, i will be arranging the final arrangement + there will be live flutes n violins recorded in a prof. studio .
I hope you guys will listen to this demo and give me some C&C. I hope this song will trigger - reminiscence of your unforgotten innocence ^^.. thanks alot ..

Link : http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemusic.cfm?bandID=284949

Best Regards,
Tera

 

[mingguan]

1. choice of instruments are nice. If got thicker string at the end even better. The high note of the piano shouldn't play so hard, else sounds annoying.

2. The melody is nice. The main theme very catchy. I like it very much.

3. The arrangement is good. When the 1st part (piano) played the main theme, it already catched my mind. make me feel want to listen more.
However, when come to 2:27, I xpected stronger version of main theme to come in, but a bit dissapointed when hear something else come in...
For the main theme come in again at 3:24, I expect stronger one (or with some thick string) to make it a good ending.

Generally, very nice written! :smt023
Well Done!!! :smt038
Keep it up!!!

 

[teraslasch]

thx for ur comments mingguan .. any1 else?