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[hay88]

hi ppl, tell me wad u think of it...i'm aware of the lack of feel and vibratos and such...but choice of notes? my first time posting a random lick hah
http://s5.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=0YJPRALL5P24C2M1HA2Z5EOTSE

 

[hifi_killer]

some interesting licks there
but the licks doesnt connect well, and try to have more "direction" in your playing.

technique wise is ok.

 

[hay88]

i guess so..experimenting with chinese patterns..

 

[sofyan]

sounds nice to me man.

 

[echoist]

sounds good to me too! maybe try to have a backing track too!

 

[satch]

nice nice. getting to ur goal i see!?

 

[Vaiyen]

nice man..if you wanna develop your melodic sense more, you can try searching for a copy of friedman's 'melodic control'.