OM: AwOoL - She (AcouStic)

[awool]

hey all...

ermm.. haha.. just wanted to know ur comments
for tis song i've played.

http://s25.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=1E80MF6OC8B001Q600J93ZKJNS
thanks..

 

[knucklehead]

cheh awool.
nice intro lahz. i like. teach me can? =p

so perhaps this is just recorded off an mp3 player/hp thus sound slightly muffled.
plus...
is the sound of bus/lorry part of the song?
haha juz kidding mate

ur songs all nice tunes yeh know..but cant comment the lyrics uhz.. cant even hear them properly

cheers mate

 

[anep]

like i've said before, the song is already a perfecto.
just need some tweaking in the recording.
yeah dood, maybe u can post the lyrics here.
really nice song dood.
*thumbs up*

 

[awool]

haha...
yep..
those were the sounds of buses in the backgrd..
the lyrics eh.. orait...

AwooL - She (AcouStic)

Verse 1

From the first time that i saw her...
To the first eye contact i had with her...
We were confuse with the games our minds were playing
That feeling we just cant describe...
It was then when she smiled at me...
I was sure it wasnt a reverie...

Verse 2

The way she untie her hair...
Was just perfect...
Her sweet smile...
Melted me away...

Chorus

She..
Is the one...
I just knew it from the first time...
She is the one...
ouhh yea....

Bridge

Im procastinating...
Just waiting for the right moment.
She'd already been taken...
But I know it aint gonna last...

Chorus

 

[knucklehead]

whoaa
touching...

change the she to he ...
everything fits perfectly for my past..
awool2
so talented ... *strangles u*

 

[DarknessFury]

Lol, for a moment, I thought it was Green Day's She...