yeah... wrote this song.... nothing much.... just an acoustic set.... hope ya like it... comments welcome.... thanks....
http://www.savefile.com/files/2019205
http://www.savefile.com/files/2019205
OM: an roiginal i wrote.... Through My Eyes
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it's a very pop song........great for getting girls' attention........vocals are quite ok but could be good with a little polishing......guitar wise....seems to be a rather straightforward song so not much error but would be better if there was an overdub to either give a thicker feel as there seems to be only 2 guitars.....
the ending also a bit abrupt....
but depending on your purpose of the song you may have accomplished what you wanted.........
the ending also a bit abrupt....
but depending on your purpose of the song you may have accomplished what you wanted.........
here's my feedback:
vocals are okie, but can be improved with tremendous care. you sounded good, but would be trying you out on several genres to strtch your potentials.
a good try on the composition of this song though. Would be great with the full accompaniment of a band.
sound quality lots of hiss on my side, maybe the recording was converted at a high rate with less noise cancellation. Should be able to do finer by adjusting to either 128k mono or 56k stereo. this would makes the sound a bit fuller with lower tone.
overall its quite easy-listening pop music, you have the potential to go further than you expected.
keep it up
vocals are okie, but can be improved with tremendous care. you sounded good, but would be trying you out on several genres to strtch your potentials.
a good try on the composition of this song though. Would be great with the full accompaniment of a band.
sound quality lots of hiss on my side, maybe the recording was converted at a high rate with less noise cancellation. Should be able to do finer by adjusting to either 128k mono or 56k stereo. this would makes the sound a bit fuller with lower tone.
overall its quite easy-listening pop music, you have the potential to go further than you expected.
keep it up
MadWerewolfBoy
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what does om mean? operation manager? orange man? err...
MadWerewolfBoy
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hmm interesting... sounds like an action...Scream_ed said:
Like opening a can of tunas? :lol:
It's a term used by pubs, cafes, etc. They will open the stage up for the customers (is it customers or is it performers who have prior arrangements with the place's owner) to perform. Some songwriters in the US started their careers this way. I read that from www.taxi.com.
Here on soft, it's just an opportunity for us to showcase our music.
It's a term used by pubs, cafes, etc. They will open the stage up for the customers (is it customers or is it performers who have prior arrangements with the place's owner) to perform. Some songwriters in the US started their careers this way. I read that from www.taxi.com.
Here on soft, it's just an opportunity for us to showcase our music.
5stringedsoul
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nice song azlan, i wanna hear the full band recording next time yea!...thanks fer comin last friday to help my fren at NYP!
spink_grrl101
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wah..so romantic.. feel like swaying to the song..reminds me of my times in the beach w...
feel like swaying to the song..reminds me of my times in the beach w... thank you guys for the kind comments..... will try to improve it.... played it at power jam.... its DOES sound good with a band... much fuller...... sorry for the poor quality.... i use acid pro for mixing.... but i just use a stupid ol comp mic to record... none of that fancy stuff..... not yet.... :lol: thanks again guys.....
turbochicken
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plausible effort.
but there's no catch.
erm, pitchy at quite a few areas.
just a suitable song to listen to while you wine and dine.
but there's no catch.
erm, pitchy at quite a few areas.
just a suitable song to listen to while you wine and dine.
