Hi man!Dey I downloaded your song, i don't know if you want my honest opinion, but this is what i feel la, I felt that number 1, the programmed drums kinda killed the overall feel of the song, the guitars were great,the tone was kinda weird for some of the fill-ins(must be due to improper equipment for recording), the bass was consistent(did not really pay attention to it), the harp and sax was a nice touch, hahah, the singing....No offence bro, but maybe after mastering it should sound ok, but I felt that that wasnt the best take on singing, especially for a song thats gonna be on an album, maybe, you guys should have spent more time recording lah, to fintetune the arrangement..must wave the flag of singapore properly you know!!!Hmm, I also thought that there were too many guitar parts(maybe cos there were 3 guitarists)..
the positive thing though is that the song sounds more like a jam, as in very open sounding,there is a lot of feel..... maybe with real drums, you could do a Live Band recording to capture the vintage feel, cos now it sounds kinda sterile(due to multitracking i guess)..
Riki on keyboards?Nice.
I think the song has potential if its recorded properly, and I have to disagree with some of you folks, cos I thought that it was quite catchy, maybe its because I'm more rock orientated...Its a raw diamond la bro, gotta polish the bugger...and NO DRINKING ON THE SET!
just my 2 cents,good first step..
PS, could I jam with Riki one day?HAHA