My Song>>"Baby GoodBye"

paigeyin

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Just trying to share my song here.
This song my own compose,name Baby Goodbye,which is something about moving on.

Recorded it on my phone,just my guitar and me.Sorry for the bad quality,I will try to make it better soon.

Baby GoodBye

Please comment.
 
Hello...No comment?

Well,here is the lyrics:
Sometimes I want to forget all the pain,
Baby you're someone I will never have,
I don't know how long can I hold on to you anymore.

Sometimes I wish all of these will end,
Baby you're someone I will never forget,
You became part of me,I don't know how to survive without you at all.

[chorus]
It's been hurting so much I finally realize
You will never be mine,
It's been raining so hard here at my side,
But you'll never know, Now I should go,
Couldn't find another reason to hold on tight,
Baby goodbye.

Sometimes I hope I can erase all my memories,
Baby you had carved a hold in me,
I don't know when I given myself to you Now nothing left anymore,

Sometimes I feel like crying for all these,
Baby everytime I reined my tears in,
Now I don't know why tears are flowing and I can't stop them anymore.

[chorus]

Songs,I written many songs for you Oh oh,
They're happy,they're sweet,they're sad,they're everything I feel,
Love,I given all my love to you Oh Oh,
It's rejected,it's ignored,I couldn't get through to you

[chorus]

OS: Sorry baby , I gotta move on,
I give my best wish to you
Be happy...

[chorus]

Baby Goodbye~
 
Hey there,

Great try. =) i think you need to put more emotions into the song. Think about what you want to express oin this song. When you sing smile to lift your soft palette to stop the creaking sound. Hope it helps. =)
 
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