My Own Rock Composition

[Brenkoh]

Hey everybody,
I was exhausted from the boredom I received as a present for my holidays.
I decided to record an original composition(with some lick steals from other artistes - as usual)
It's just a draft and nothing near it's end product.

Here it goes: (ignore sound quality ,it's just recorded off a mic on the laptop)


http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lBW2jRHjEfY

Give me your comments/opinions/criticisms.
Give constructive advice.

-------Gear ----------
Recording Equipment : Lenovo Ideapad y450 Laptop "Webcam" Camera
Amplifier: Peavey Rage 158 Transtube Series 15 Watts Amp
Guitar: Fender Stratocaster *MIJ (Pickups: SD-Bridge , Stock-Mid, Dimarzio-Neck)
Pedals: Sansamp GT-2 , Digitech Digidelay , Randolf-modded Ibanez TS-7

 

[ParkertR]

Nice riffs and overall good composition. Nitpicking on your playing and accuracy though, just gotta practice more, but overall thumbs up. Continue to write!

 

[Brenkoh]

Thanks alot. Greatly appreciated. Yeah I did it on the spot. and usually, I mess up when doing " on the spot"s. haha ^^

 

[jeremyspk]

i really like your music.
There's so much emotions in it. (who cares if effects are employed. they are there for a purpose!)
It'll be awesome to have the chance to work with you some day!

 

[Brenkoh]

Haha. I'm just one request away. Bandless.