My Original,"Better Things"

[eric19]

Hey guys,
i need some feedbacks and comments and just to know what you guys think
of my original song, "Better Things".
I have been writing and composing for quite a while
and i want to expose my music now. haha.

MySpace.com - er|c - Acoustic - www.myspace.com/ericmorthan

here's the link to my account.


thank you.



eric

 

[ac]

ok you need a real hook. The first bit of it is just too much like knocking on heaven's door.

Also you might like to improve on the recording equipment and as an eq choice, try to lower the mids & lows of your vocals, and maintain your diction.