my first serious recording

[tomkeifer1986]

hi guys just need some feedback on my first serious instrumental recording which i made with line 6 ux2.im currently using ableton and i dont exactly know how to get that perfect sound.so if you guys can help me out here it will be a great deal of help.and feedback on how i could improve on the song would be greatly appreciated cause im thinking of making this into a song.
thanks for listening.i appreciate it.everything done by me.
heres the link

http://tomkeifer.multiply.com/music/item/94/new_1_song

 

[tomkeifer1986]

come on guys no comments or anything?i really need the feedback.

 

[lepak]

maybe because we must be a member to hear...

 

[RoRK]

Yup. Folks aren't looking forward to marketing/spam emails which normally apply for such sites. Stick the the song up somewhere where it is more listener-friendly.

Cheers!

 

[tomkeifer1986]

oh.ill try to put it into myspace then