Loving You For Always

pablo

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This is a song I composed specially to my dearest wife for our upcoming 8th wedding anniversary. Hope she'll love it...hope you all like it too.
Not very fancy and a bit short, but what matters is that it came from the heart. Once in a while, it's nice (and less stressful) to play some relaxed and
slow riffs instead of shreds and sweeps...ha ha. My piano playing sucks coz I've never and actually can't be so bothered to learn how to play it the proper way.
Guitar is still my Number 2 love (after my wife, of course). Maybe one of these days I'll try to write a bridge part to the song...

Appreciate if my fellow soft-ies can comment and give feedback on the song...

Loving You For Always

Cheerio !
 
i think the backing track's quality should be raised, it gives this 'dirty' unclean feeling to the track.

parts when only one guitar is playing, the track would sound empty suddenly, u could add a foundation, say a soft(volume) heavy(tone) guitar track or a keyboard strings part to support the track a little perhaps?

my sincere advice :)
 
very touching melody! gret stuff dude! you super minti cool !

the melodies inter-play with almost a counter point feel....very progressive!

I can't seem to open the song World's Apart, but the rest of the songs I really like. Very Satrianic :)

You one classy song writer.

RGX! *SALUTE* !
 
ala_carte : i'll definitely put 1 or 2 more backing trax to it as you suggested, thnx mate !

RGX312L : appreciate your compliments dude ! I dunno as to why you can't open World's Apart, maybe next time
if you're free you can try again coz there's no problem the last time I checked...this song differ very much from
the other 3 coz it's heavier with the 2nd part guitar solo I tried to do a bit of Malmsteen at half past six... :smt100 ha ha
 
pablo said:
ala_carte : i'll definitely put 1 or 2 more backing trax to it as you suggested, thnx mate !

RGX312L : appreciate your compliments dude ! I dunno as to why you can't open World's Apart, maybe next time
if you're free you can try again coz there's no problem the last time I checked...this song differ very much from
the other 3 coz it's heavier with the 2nd part guitar solo I tried to do a bit of Malmsteen at half past six... :smt100 ha ha


you??? half past six??? You too humble. I can't play very well but my skill in appreciation is MUCH better than my palying 'skill'. You have very good technique :)

But it is your composition that impresses me even more :) Can;t wait to hear your new stuff :)

Tried again, can open Worlds Apart.

WOWOW! I love the way you put funk into metal. Jaw dropping stuffs !
The drums are real?

RGX:)
 
RGX312L : thnx again bro...I mixed several drum loop patterns from GarageBand for the song Worlds Apart.
The 1st section of mandolin,funk guitar and the wah rhythm are also loops. Only all solos/harmony,bass,strings
and 2nd section rhythm guitar parts are recorded live by me.

As for Loving You For Always, I'm in the process to lay down rhythm trax as suggested by ala_carte but I seemed
to reach a mental block to come out with a bridge section to the song... :smt017 hee

RoRk : appreciate dude your comments,glad to hear that my countless takes to record the piano part "isn't too shabby"...ha ha :smt038
 
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