Lifehouse-You&Me cover

[j_m_s]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mj4CUDdcq0o&feature=user

pre edit

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=elXvOHQOFiE

Post edit

Edited to put in other tracks. Used mac book mic.

voice still recovering. had a really bad sore throat. heh. and a fair bit of phlegm. so please pardon my singing

timing wise i messed up too.

Dont expect too good a cover yeah?

Added in a lead line. Which is crappy. and bad phrasing. :X

Criticism wanted!

10 mins of work. 1 take only.

Cheers
James

 

[daryl]

The main areas you could improve on you already suggested yourself - mainly tempo problems and singing-wise you could enunciate the words more carefully/clearly. And not rush the singing too.

But, actually, the effect with the fast tempo and lead guitar with everything does add a nice feel to the song but you are going off tempo here and there.

 

[j_m_s]

yepp. i agree with you dude. Gotta work alot on my timing. Been having this prob for awhile. heh.

thanks for watching!

 

[weckl-x]

Actually, I think if you really wanna sound like [SIZE=-1]Jason Wade, can't enunciate too clearly either

I think more play with dynamics would've been nice. Felt like you were doing an all-out sprint. Nice effort, keep it up!
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[Taylorboy87]

If you can't sing as loud as you play, then play softer

 

[j_m_s]

thanks for the comments guys.

Taylorboy, agreed!

Cheers
James

 

[jupzones]

i think the post edit just sounds very messy.

mix of the individual elements could be better.

your singing needs o go louder, or your guitar softer.

but hey good start.

 

[RaztyBaby]

(claps) .. WTG !

For a start,this is farway gud.You got e guts tho.Keep on trying,bro.

p/s :- Do ya homework on e dictions.

 

[keithC]

great job james