LAST DAY OUT UPLOADED NEW SONG !! do give ur comments!

Kimmi

Kimmi

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hey Guys,

we are last day out and we've just recored our song heart tragedies ( new version )in our guitarist bedroom.

Hope the recording is able to show the band's potential though the quality isn;t up to those done in studios.Sorry guys.

but do drop by and check it.



Kim,LDO

www.myspace.com/lastdayoutonline
 
I like the intro,bro! how did you make it? issit recording magic or you're using something like a killswitch?

record at a better place ar..it sounds good :D
 
great thing you guy are doing ! keep at it.

you think the beat a little err....'not smooth?' I dunno, or perhaps it wa sintentionally done as a style of the band.

maybe it is a demo, this particular version, I can;t really get the energy from the vocals.

just me own view. doesn;t mean it is right.


RGX312L
 
Nice lah bros. Don't forget to write more songs. Lots of talent in the band but do not forget to improve on your instruments.

Ways to improve?

As mentioned, improve on musicianship. It's already good but it should get better by 100-300%. Singer has a good voice but should look into issues related to diction.

Cheers
RoRK
 
agreed with the Singer having good voice..he could further improve himself by pushing his voice..place more emotion rather than just slurring the words..

great work,I'm envious...someone needs to tame me with peanuts!
 
As mentioned, improve on musicianship. It's already good but it should get better by 100-300%. Singer has a good voice but should look into issues related to diction.
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haha.thanks RoRk and AEnimic.Wat do u mean by "issues of related diction"
 
the track sounds good despite the quality..

keep working on it man.. u guys are getting better and better..

maybe u would like to add some highs in the song cuz it sounded quite similar for all the parts.. yups, just keep rocking out the potentials man :)
 
I forgot to mention that I prefer the acoustic version. It's got more vibe and originality. My suggestion is to use the 'electric' version with some other lyrics. It's quite good; it's jsut that I have preference for the acoustic version.

As for diction, during long phrases, the singer seems to lose focus/breath and sort of slurs the last few words.

And do something about the vocals for the Take Me Away, it's far in terms of quality from the other songs there.

Cheers
RoRK
 
haha.we decided to changed the sound but keep the lyrics but thanks.

ya,he did a full song at one time.we didn't like overlapped it over tracks so we didn't stop and ya,he went ou of breath on occasion.

Take me away was done a long time before i mange to get a hold of the recording equipment.half way there..haha.

thanks RoRk,ur comments are very constructive,help and good and will keep working on it.
 
studio recording is definitely on our list of things to do but right now,everyone so caught up..damn.

woah cool...all the best on ur recording man..
 
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