you have a very pleasant singing voice, you definitely have musicality, and you're good with the guitar. Ok lah, decent at least. my grouses with that recording lies with the guitar- it's too looud, but it's not like you can really do much with it since it's meant to be at that loudness, eh? you tend to be a bit nasal at times, but that's okay since almost all amateurs tend to do that very often. hehe. you definitely have something there, so practice more!