Hi。。。Chinese Original

[Asher Hoe]

Hi，I'm Asher。。。

I started out as a lead guitar player in a rock band 15 years ago.
When my band broke up in 2002, I gave up music for several years before picking myself up from where I left off...
Well, as they said, you pick yourself up from where you fall, isn't it?
Um...now I had started to do my own Chinese Pop Music，writing lyrics and composing on my own。。。
This is a song I had written for a female artist of a quite popular major label，
well the song didn't get chosen in the end。。。。。。
But I didn't wanna waste the hard work anyway。。。

I'm 33 now，I'm not playing to succeed，just trying to enjoy the ride as well as the journey....

Well...Here's the Demo link and lyrics...I would appreciate any suggestions on how I can improve...Thank you.
http://yc.5sing.com/2235056.html###


《伪装》

演唱：Asher
词：Asher，Dan
曲：Asher
编曲：Dan
后期：Zhang Ji

两人之间还装作一样
把微笑装饰得很漂亮
我以为生活还是过得简单
你还会假装为我说谎

你的笑容和平常一样
笑着对我说甜蜜情话
在你眼里 残留的忐忑不安
而我却难辨真假

爱情让人心慌
让人都傻的疯狂
还是不能想象
模糊你的模样

爱情让人受伤
却还是无法抵挡
该不该被原谅
留下我一个人疗伤

爱你很久早已经习惯伪装
就让时间带我离开你身旁
从此不再勉强
不再抱有一丝 幻想

 

[soft]

The song sounds good. The singing could be better though. Maybe like you said, a female singer might make it nicer.

Keep up the good work!

 

[Asher Hoe]

Hey thanks...yup..I agree I'm not the best singer around. Actually I'm just trying to get the music idea across...like all demos do. I think it's better for me to just do the writing and let the singers handle the singing...haha! Cheers!