Help me rate my band..

[zoom8080]

hi everybody...

would appreciate honest critics and comments abt a song that my recorded sometime end of last yr.

http://www.myspace.com/innersense04

Thanks.
Cheers...

 

[daryl]

the song is quite okay, but honestly i didnt like the vocals.

 

[neuro182]

the vocals is still okie la.. but i tink he needs more power to get the crowds going high..

if im not wrong, he's not confident on going high yet, but slowly & surely he will be there one day

 

[NoMiS]

jus my few cents worth of opinion, i felt tht the band could be tighter, song writing wise well its not too bad, prolly gotta arrange it more. melody wise, i guess u guys need to to make it catchier or make it more memoriable, and lastly gotta work on the vocals area. out of ten i will give u guys 7. its a good effort.keep it up. hope to hear more of it!

 

[zoom8080]

thanks so much for all the remarks..

Cheers

 

[DoubleDecker]

I think I agree with the rest ... after listening to it 6 times.

Try having some "character" in your vocals ... bring out the emotions.

 

[DazzLing]

got potential, esp the chorus. the verse needs 2 gel with it i guess. mo congruence/consistency in the melody will b great. nice ending! jia you!

 

[saito]

quite good writing - logical entry with the intro. I like the way the lead fills in that lyrical gap after the chorus.

"Why are you hiding from these daydreams..." perhaps a backing vocal might help you there, perhaps an octave higher.

Perhaps you guys should try going live

email me
mark@flow.com.sg

p.s.: nice wordplay - innersence = innocence

 

[anep]

the song is ok. not bad. like said, the vocals needs more, err, force, izzit. yerp.

good luck.

 

[shredrat]

not bad...nice guitar solo.