guitar solo improvisation

[fendergibsonlespaul]

hey guys..
just made an instrumental guitar solo..
just wanna know what you guys think abt it..

maybe you guys could help me out on ways to improve..
esp on how to do some sweep picking or just to make it cleaner..
thanks..


http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VTzw8OSoTcA


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