funk fusion improv vid

[hay88]

just recorded this earlier. forgive the sloppy playing and poor sound. the backing is just too fun to play to haha
http://youtube.com/watch?v=JyqVycgksEY

 

[BlackMoo]

bro kx bro i envy you ... shredder!

 

[Shredaholic]

hot licks man! really pawnage!

 

[ShredCow]

Dude, you're out of tune and playing in the wrong key.

1:06 onwards then you found your key.

Maybe do a re-recording? Otherwise, it sounds bad just because its in the wrong key.

 

[monk]

rhythm

lots of fast notes .. but couldnt feel the 2-4 rhythm .. or mebbe it's just me
for such a style or similar i recommend to go to greg howe's website and watch the winner for greg's play for me contest

 

[hay88]

hey thx for checking it out. thx for the comments will improve

 

[NoMiS]

overall, besides all the mistakes mentioned. i gotta give u the credit tht u did make the effort to improve, compared to the playings u had last time till now, u have def improved. so work on it more and u will be on ur way!

 

[Ized]

woah nice shred man

 

[mandric]

Dude, you're out of tune and playing in the wrong key.

tt's a little harsh. there are no wrong notes in music, only poor choices. i give this dude the props. cheers mate. timing is one issue though.

 

[ShredCow]

tt's a little harsh. there are no wrong notes in music, only poor choices. i give this dude the props. cheers mate. timing is one issue though.

Sure. There is also no such thing as "timing issues" in comtemporary music, only poor feel.

Heh.

 

[hay88]

thx for still checking it out till today. alright will keep those pointers in mind