Excerpt solo- Cloud nine-Ridge(Original) need comment!.NoMiS

[NoMiS]

hello pple. this is a solo tht i wrote for one of the original from my band Ridge. the song is cloud 9. wat i need to noe is ur critique on the solo!!!.. bring it on.. be it harsh or not. cuz i need to break out of this shit.. but be kind ok?? i noe i am kinda bad at this.. so sorry.. but thanx in advance~~!!!! oh ya recording is bad.. cuz i use the com's sound recorder to record.. sorry ah working in the studio now.. so no recording software cept for this.
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[NoMiS]

no one??!!! sorry if the recording is real bad....

 

[NoMiS]

ok nvm.. thanx pple.. if ever theres anyone whu wish to comment.. pls do!
thanx..

 

[sofyan]

nice vibrato dude. yah the quality is pretty bad, can't really hear the back so i can't say much. probably sounds great from what i can make out.

 

[NoMiS]

thanx! mmm.. u mean u cant hear the backing track? yea man i think its bad.. but tot it was still audible.. but in anyways.. thanx for the compliment.. maybe i shud record it dwn properly.. ahha..

 

[NoMiS]

my apologies for the bad recording... now i understand why no one comment!!!! haha!! my bad!!! but thanx pple!! for viewing!!