Hey Shawne!
Comments:
1. Your ShawneyDepp user name on Youtube is very catchy. Consider signing off with that name in your posts. People might remember you better that way.
2. To hell with time constraints! Don't put out anything that you feel is subpar. If you don't think it's subpar, no need to mention time constraints. What do you mean by time constraints anyways? Was your label pressing you to release the cover?
3. For the cover specifically the "oooh"s at the start started kinda flat. First impression accordingly fell flat.
4. The first verse was crap to be honest.
5. But when you got to the chorus it's like "wow!" You have the potential to provide very strong vocals. Consider switching up the verse and doing your own version of the verse if it's not providing enough opportunity for you to show off.
6. Have orgasms in your own time. Sure, your orgasmic facials provided entertainment.. but very little. Because you're on youtube, where people are watching a video as opposed to just listening to music, consider performing more dynamically and energetically. You're good looking, so really make the ladies fall in love with you.
Overall, decent, but not memorable. But you have potential!
Churr!
