I liked the way the song flowed =) your voice was nice for the verse, but when it hit the chrous it kinda got lil pitchy, but hey i wont blame you for that, the chrous for that song requires a falsetto of chris martin ( i tend to over exaggerate) but other than that, good attempt, nice guitar playing as well =)
Keep it going Jonathan! You've got a great voice and I hope you know it. You also sound a lil' like Jason Wade of Lifehouse at times. The way you slur and accent your words. in a good way!