Audiocean: we have a demo now!

thnk you guys~

on behalf of the band, we appreciate the comments.
thnks again for listening.
we will strive to make more good music!



- audiocean guitarist
 
the song sounds pretty nice for a first demo but definitely lots of room for improvement. =)

just my 2 cents:
1) vocalist tends to be abit pitchy at times going flat especially during the first few notes, the feel on the song not that suitable cos she sounds pretty much the same (i.e. draggy) for most of the song. might wanna try to get abit of variation/dynamism into the singing given the powerful feel that this song's supposed to give. perhaps the other members should try harmonising on the chorus and certain parts to give that extra punch.

2) guitars sounded abit out of tune to me but technique definitely needs abit of working, try to maintain consistency and articulation in the playing cos it matters.

3) drums sounded abit edgy to me. but overall sounded okay =) maybe abit more consistency and articulation on the hihat and snare work might help.

overall, a quite nice song, definitely has alot more potential after you polish the rough ends off.

keep posting =) cheers
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Kelvin
Exotherma
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