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winterjem

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Hey softies,

I'm kind of starting out... getting seriously serious at this so it will help a lot if people can give me some constructive criticism/ encouragement and what-not especially for my originals. :)

Here's all me stuff. Hope you all enjoy my music!
http://www.youtube.com/user/krystalwinter

To those who took the trouble to listen and comment, thanks lots! =n.n=

ARGH I FORGOT TO PUT JAPANESE IN THE TITLE!!! >.< How you change the title?? =/
 
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Your song

Hey..there..

It's pretty cool.anyway put more passion and drive to it..

I;m supporting, and valued all musicians for those with or without original..
the best of the best is to create our own identity look for your own identity okay, and raise your own flag as a musicians...

Try not to copy the others do your own..this is the time for original..make it big impact..believe in yourself ..love... what you do..just do it.lol..anyway u already have certain to it.. keep it up .enjoy ..lol..

wanna hear my stuff..here.. www.myspace.com/humblepie780 thanks..

I'm not a singer but i just give a try ..have a nice day..coolio..Kiko
 
Hi Arista!

I liked your cover "Shut up and Give me a hug". I was wondering if there's a way I can get in contact with you and discuss how we can possibly work together and let you perform at one of my bars. Nothing sleazy. My company's reputable but I'll reveal more in private. Maybe I can get your contact number and email so I can send you more info about my company?

My email is tolora83@gmail.com.

Hear from you soon!

Joey
 
Do you like steve vai? Cause of winter"JEM"...
Anyway, I agree with above. You should do Jazz and bossa stuff. And maybe cover more jpop stuff would be nice. Maybe some old ayumi stuff like.. Depend on you or You?
 
Do you like steve vai? Cause of winter"JEM"...
Anyway, I agree with above. You should do Jazz and bossa stuff. And maybe cover more jpop stuff would be nice. Maybe some old ayumi stuff like.. Depend on you or You?

Argh any particular songs you all can recommend? I've got a whole lot of Jpop stuff in my channel just because I like Japanese music but the main purpose for me on starting my youtube account was to see the feedback for my original songs.

And the reason for my username is not because of steve vai. Haha.
 
hmmmmmmmmm. I kinda have a love-hate relationship with "shut up and give me a hug" Its a good song but you sound so......... whimsical (erm is this the right word) and lack some conviction to really drive the song, thus it comes off as being abit irritating sometimes (sorry!!!!!!!!!!:p) Love the part leading to the chorus (i think) where you suddenly change chords to give it a bluesy/jazzy feel. Overall its a good effort, you just need to iron out some kinks and you'll be there.
 
hmmmmmmmmm. I kinda have a love-hate relationship with "shut up and give me a hug" Its a good song but you sound so......... whimsical (erm is this the right word) and lack some conviction to really drive the song, thus it comes off as being abit irritating sometimes (sorry!!!!!!!!!!:p) Love the part leading to the chorus (i think) where you suddenly change chords to give it a bluesy/jazzy feel. Overall its a good effort, you just need to iron out some kinks and you'll be there.

Lol conviction? I meant for the song to be fun. But I suppose now that I look at the llyrics it could be a bit emo also... but the melody really doesn't suit that kind of feel. Mmm maybe it's my face. If you close your eyes and listen, it's it any better? =/ Still, thanks for your feedback. =n.n= It's ok everyone is entitled to their own opinions.

Argh why is everyone only commenting about this song? I've got about 8-ish originals up and a whole lot of covers! >.< But thanks for everyone's feedback so far.
 
I'll..have to agree with flowersamurai on the whimsical part...I don't really know if its the right word to describe either.
To me the song is almost on the verge of being...I don't know how to put it.

However! I like the lyrics a lot and the melody. I apologise but I feel some how you can sing better.

Overall I the shut up gimme a hug a lot =)
 
Argh tell me how should I sing it then, so it's better!!! If you don't know how to put it, I won't know either!!! >.<" Still, glad you like it on the whole. =n.n=

Ok this whimsical business... I went to look up the dictionary. Whimsical = erratic; unpredictable <- are you sure you guys mean this???
 
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Argh tell me how should I sing it then, so it's better!!! If you don't know how to put it, I won't know either!!! >.<" Still, glad you like it on the whole. =n.n=

Ok this whimsical business... I went to look up the dictionary. Whimsical = erratic; unpredictable <- are you sure you guys mean this???

hmmmmmm. Maybe whimsical is not the word. Ok lets see...... At times you sound like you're not there? Like....erm........ you're floating about in candyland or something........?????????!!!!!!????????? aiyah don't know how to describe lah lol I feel that its a good song though and I listen to rock/blues/psychedelic,etc but not acoustic pop songs and you made me like 1! So good job! :)
 
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