Any thoughts or comments on my original composition+singing on youtube?

[Ankhfairy]

Hi guys,

I'm just curious on your thoughts on my composition, voice etc.

Hope to hear from anyone out there so that I can improve....

Here's the youtube link to my composition and singing.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hvPb1t2EYzA

Cheers!

 

[Faisal Bin Abdul Aziz]

A very nice song. It grows on me.

 

[LadyInTears]

man you're good