Three original songs of mine...

angelixangel

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Hi, I recently recorded 3 songs composed by me and with my friend's help. Hope that I can receive some advices on how to improve. Also, I would also appeal for someone kind enough to arrange the accompaniments for me, since I am horrible in compositions.... X(

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5q2o2r1b4Rg
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SVbM5NOqV5M
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4HhGftVJsrM

Edit: Please do note that since I am currently still a student and due to the limitations from my parents, I am looking for someone in TP, whom I can possibly collaborate with in the future. Thanks.
 
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Sure.

Dreams:
I have lived my life in the ways you wanted
So many aspirations you had for me to achieve
But looking back on these, I know that in my heart
I have a vision, an aspiration and I want to break free.

My visions are what I see myself to be
My dreams are what I aspire to be
My heart is set and there's no turning back
So please set me free, free to fulfill my destiny

Nothing is impossible, just give me the chance
to prove myself as so many has done.
I am a winged bird which could fly
Caged up in a world where I couldn't try.

My visions embed in my head
My soul buried in my dreams
My heart is longing for the day that I can
Finally reach the path paved out for me

My dreams, would you help me make it come alive
or would you be the one who smoother the dancing flames
My destiny, would you guide me thought the journey
or would you be the one to thwart me from my destination

My visions- I sing them to you
My dreams- I show them to you
My destiny is what my heart wants to achieve
Hear my silent prayer fills the night sky tonight

and when the stars comes out and shine
help me become a shining star
shining from my destiny
be the one to make the difference in me


梦想:
三百六十五天,我做个乖乖女孩。
三百六十五天,我听从你的吩咐。
自从年幼时,以尽了最大的能力。
但你,有没有真正了解我的喜爱?

我的心,你懂不懂?
我的理想,你知不知道?
让我张开翅膀,飞向天空,飞向那蓝蓝的天空。
我的心,你懂不懂?我的期望,你了不了解?
所以请您想一想,认真地想想我真心的愿望!

小小的我,什么事也不懂。
要她做什么,就乖乖去做。
但当我长大后,我发现了件事。
那就是我有个梦想要实现。

我的心,你懂不懂?
我的理想,你知不知道?
让我张开翅膀,飞向天空,飞向那蓝蓝的天空。
我的心,你懂不懂?我的期望,你了不了解?
所以请您想一想,认真地想想我真心的愿望!

或许你觉得,这梦想很不实际。
或许你认为,我是做不到的。
但我想说的事,直到失败,我决不放弃。
所以请你们就这次支持我一次吧。

我的心,你懂不懂?
我的理想,你知道了吗?
让我张开翅膀,飞向天空,飞向那蓝蓝的天空。
我的心,你懂了吗?我的期望,你了解了吗?
所以请你们,就这次帮助我实现我的梦想吧!


Waiting:
No matter how long it will be,
I will always be thinking of you.
The stars are shining,
the moon is smiling, years along.

No matter how long it will be,
I will wait for you,
thinking of you, always.
Till the end of the world!

Your presence comforts me, your smile makes me laugh,
like a shining moon, you lights up my life.
Why don't you come, come back to me?
Don't you miss me, don't you like me anymore?

Always thinking about you,
writing and talking about you.
Till the stars cease to shine,
till the moon cease to rise,
till I cease to breathe.

No matter how long it will be,
I will always be waiting for you.
No matter where you live,
my spirit will always be with you!

So please come back to me please,
come back to me please.
Back into my dull, dull dark life,
like shooting stars in the night sky,
that lights up my life.
 
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