Rate my singing! :)

[tinkerbell]

Hello guys!
please please listen and comment/criticize!
I also wrote a song, but i just did the first verse/chorus (with really poor recording/syncronizing skills) please give feedback! thankyouu!

http://www.imeem.com/people/MiYTYmZ/music/

 

[dir]

it's nice, reminds me of some lofi folky songs. You need to invest in some proper recording gear or get in touch with people who do.
I only heard briefly, but I think you need to apply more dynamics when singing, don't be afraid to belt it out once in a while!

 

[tinkerbell]

Okay!
Thank you for your advice!
Invest in gears for example? Sorry, I don't know a thing on it!