knocking on heaven's door

[wynstan]

http://s28.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=2TTKLZKWQOA2U0OVKUVV1CADS5

sung by joyfulmelly and played by me... do give ur comments...

 

[thor666]

Lovely voice.

However, the melody was a bit bland there... some variation between the verse and the chorus would help. and the choice of some notes could be better. and some notes can drag a little longer.

guitar sounds alright. nice cover... try doing a version that's a bit more varied and melodic? would help.

 

[joyfulmelly]

ok, lol honestly i wasn't crazy over this song. i did think maybe some stylising in the second chorus, but i was in a hurry to hand in my homework! sorry wyn. but i could try again another day. :roll:

 

[wynstan]

well if u wan to im ok... ahaha but i find its good enuff liao... hahha

 

[deedeeboi]

music to the ears!!...wohoo!..great job i guess.. 8)

maybe you should do acoustic covers on AVRIL,Michelle Branch and stuff like that..

great potential,,