All This While - Khai Han (Original)

[KhaiHan]

I just wrote this song about 3 hours ago. Excuse the singing mispitches etc. Just tell me if you enjoyed the song.

http://www.filefreak.com/pfiles/84187/All This While.wav

You prefer to be alone,
but I'm lost without you
I've got my own two feet
But you're the one I'm walking to
You're the reason I believe
In things that I couldn't see
Is there something behind your smile?
Something that you wouldn't speak about?

Us [G]
Something's that inside your heart? [Em]
Something you've been keeping [D]
All this while [C]
Something that you wanna say
I hope its good news I pray
Or is it a secret kept
All this while

At times it seems so clear
That you don't really need me
At times I feel ignored
When you don't even wanna speak
And I just don't wanna care
But I guess I'm just too weak
Don't keep me hanging on
If you really don't care about

Us
Really don't care about me
And all the things we've done
All this while
I just don't know what to think
The suspense is killing me now
I can't stop thinking
All this while

Bridge [Bm C G D]
And then you kiss my head
Like the very first time
And you pulled me close to you

And as our cheeks came close
Your lips to my ear
You broke to a whisper

Baby I've been loving you
And I'm still in love
With this person I'm holding
All this while
I won't never ever leave
Cos with only you I'm me
I've always been yours
All this while

 

[btherl]

Did you copy and paste that url (including the "...") from another post?

Edit: Don't worry, I did the same thing over in the singing success forum

 

[KhaiHan]

Huh? No. Just click it. It'll download the file automatically.

 

[btherl]

Have you clicked on the link yourself?

 

[growlingsoulpup]

Url doesn't work, mate. It's got a "..." in the middle of it. haha.

 

[KhaiHan]

For some reason it keeps cutting my link. Click here.

 

[btherl]

That's working, thanks. I'll have a listen tomorrow. I remember your voice is pretty good from the previous clips I've heard from you!

 

[btherl]

I enjoyed it. It's a nice song, and I like the lyrics too.

Sometimes your pronunciation gets lazy though. Eg you pronounce "I" as "ah" and "while" as "whaal" sometimes. Also "on" as "own".

 

[KhaiHan]

Well, for me, it comes through with the singing. Its not an oral exam you know. Sometimes if you don't know what the song is talking about, you check the lyrics.

That's why those words are there.

But thanks anyway.

 

[Chenglehung]

Nice song and nice vocals but in the english music industry, pronunication is just very important.

 

[babyjosef17]

I have to agree with their comments. You must work on your pronunciation.

It's cool that you have your own song. Though to be honest, It's too common. Pretty sure it won't get any radio airplay