Hey
Hows it going guys?
I just did an original song and a cover song, hope you guys give some constructive comments. Please take some time to finish the songs. Thanks. It is just a demo, some parts might be uneven or not very well done.
The swan song (Song, playing, lyrics by me)
And the sun
Raise it's angle
down my
dirty window
Moon's dried itself up
down last
sunday sutumn
We'll grace down
to the wire
We'll spin ourselves
to beauty
Absurb will be
slown down
to the point
of beauty
You swing by my hut
You drown in my dream
You glance through my corridor
Singing the song of swan
Mama oh mama
whose right to take your wrinkled skin
Mama oh mama
will you take me there
Grace (Jeff Buckley)
There's the moon asking to stay
Long enough for the clouds to fly me away
Though it's my time coming, I'm not afraid, afraid to die
My fading voice sings of love,
But she cries to the clicking of time,
Of time
Wait in the fire...
And she weeps on my arm
Walking to the bright lights in sorrow
Oh drink a bit of wine we both might go tomorrow,oh my love
And the rain is falling and I believe
My time has come
It reminds me of the pain I might leave
Leave behind
Wait in the fire...
And I feel them drown my name
So easy to know and forget with this kiss
But I'm not afraid to go but it goes so slow
Hows it going guys?
I just did an original song and a cover song, hope you guys give some constructive comments. Please take some time to finish the songs. Thanks. It is just a demo, some parts might be uneven or not very well done.
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[URL="http://www.myspace.com/fyt88"]http://www.myspace.com/fyt88[/URL]The swan song (Song, playing, lyrics by me)
And the sun
Raise it's angle
down my
dirty window
Moon's dried itself up
down last
sunday sutumn
We'll grace down
to the wire
We'll spin ourselves
to beauty
Absurb will be
slown down
to the point
of beauty
You swing by my hut
You drown in my dream
You glance through my corridor
Singing the song of swan
Mama oh mama
whose right to take your wrinkled skin
Mama oh mama
will you take me there
Grace (Jeff Buckley)
There's the moon asking to stay
Long enough for the clouds to fly me away
Though it's my time coming, I'm not afraid, afraid to die
My fading voice sings of love,
But she cries to the clicking of time,
Of time
Wait in the fire...
And she weeps on my arm
Walking to the bright lights in sorrow
Oh drink a bit of wine we both might go tomorrow,oh my love
And the rain is falling and I believe
My time has come
It reminds me of the pain I might leave
Leave behind
Wait in the fire...
And I feel them drown my name
So easy to know and forget with this kiss
But I'm not afraid to go but it goes so slow
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