runaway for the grammies

[pseagal]

Hi fellow songwriters and musicians

I am a lyricist and I have been writing some songs for a few years. I am not arrogrant or proud, but, I find it really hard to meet any serious and likeminded melody composers out there who aren't into just the rock stuff.

I want to write more mainstream commercial pop songs. I took a break from writing for a few years, but, this year I wrote the latest song Runaway.

I hope all you people out there in Softland, the Softlanders will please support me by commenting on my ballad, Runaway. I wrote this with a fellow Singaporean Mark Khoo! Thanks Mark!!

I want to feel inspired to write my lyrics again, but I want to work with one or two talented melody composers out there who dare to dream and live it..At least try their best.

Pls read my post under musicains wanted. there is more details about what I am hoping to achieve with the melody composers. I am Singaporean!

Musically yours
Pams

Click on the following link..to hear
http://www.myspace.com/pamelaseagal

 

[RGX312L]

I got 3 words to sum up the song

W O W


...playing it for the 6th time now......

RGX312L

 

[AgingYouth]

Sorry, the lyrics are pretty blah... but that's commercial pop for ya...

At least the lyrics are not these...

Lucky that my lips not only mumble
They spill kisses like a fountain
Lucky that my breasts are small and humble
So you don't confuse them with mountains
Lucky I have strong legs like my mother
To run for cover when I need it
And these two eyes that for no other
The day you leave will cry a river

But I like the production and the voice. Good stuff. Potential hit? Maybe.

 

[BadgerS88]

small and humble?

why not busty and lusty? haha :lol:

 

[rylche]

Good commercial pop.

 

[fgl]

sweet

 

[lavivacampeon]

Hi fellow songwriters and musicians

I want to feel inspired to write my lyrics again, but I want to work with one or two talented melody composers out there who dare to dream and live it..At least try their best.

Hi Pams

With refernce to the message above, I am kindda of melody composer. I started composing my 1st song which was in 1998 and due to no strong support and encouragement, I gave up music for almost 5 years.

I am now back and have my own music channel which I showcased my talents. Alternatively, you may wish to click on the links as attached and I am reachable at yusoff.majid@gmail.com.

Anyways, just enjoy the vids

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mwHfucRbLB8

or

take a sneak peek into my profile or other vids @...

http://www.youtube.com/lavivacampeon

Until then,

Cheers and keep on grooving