wah. pretty good song despite the lack of a clear bass. vocals are sharp, sweet and clear. my only gripe is taht it could be a bit more powerful when she sings the chorus, yet again it also depends on the settings of the mic. it falls a bit flat there, but still good.
guitars are excellent, although it did sound a bit weird at chorus. as in, some chords did not seem very suitable at certain points of it. a different tab would have been better as the progression would sound more melodic.
i'm not a drum expert, so all i can say it sounded fine =/
all in all this is a very good original, worthy of an 8.5 or even a 9 upon 10. keep it up guys!!