pls rate my singing of 你是我的眼

[jh85]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=B3qY0yGNElk

 

[jianrong]

Quite good. And i like your vocal colour. And somemore this song is not an easy song to sing. You have done it quite well.

Part to take note from pre chorus - 那團.

I think you can give it more power on - 你是我的眼.

Overall on some parts you have input your own style which is good.

And i think you got an discomfort throat, as in not feeling well. Just recovering from flu or sore throat?

Paiseh, i got so many singing flaws yet i still give my own opinion. Hope you dont mind.

 

[jeremyspk]

wow quite impressed.
Just wondering, do you usually sing english songs?

 

[TEACUP]

Hi,

Firstly, it's quite impressive for you to be able to sing this song.

you truly has a nice vocal texture.

ever thought of improving your singing or get an instructor to give you pointers on your vocal flaws?

Teacup

 

[Jetame]

wow awesome songs and awesome singer!

 

[jh85]

hi!

thanks everyone for the good and bad comment...

jeremy---- i like to sing english song... but i sing it very local... do you get wat i mean?

teacup---- erm... singing is all about myself... if i can sing it good then good lor.... if got flaws also nvm...

jetame---- thank you!!!

jianrong... the point you point out i very agree... but because i record it using my hp... so the quality is not tt good... if i sing it live... there will be contrast between the 1st and 2nd part...

you all can check out my others songs also... feel free to comment again...

 

[emmanuel]

my comments

Nice singing, but do take note of your pitching, some parts are flat. and take note of your "wei ying" Don't let it "drop". Sustain it. Sometime we want it to slowly fade off, but it goes flat. So do take note=) Another thing, sing with more feeling, interpret the song. Just my humble comments

 

[jh85]

i will take note of that.... thanks for the comment...

 

[kave]

the first part was good. But closer to the chorus and 2nd half of the song. I feel you were dragging the tougher notes, like you were forcing out. It kinda lost the standard it set on the 1st half. Cos the chorus there was no 'dou ying' like how u sang out the first part of the song. After the first chorus there was none of that after that. 2nd half of the song was 'plain'/souless

And i can feel you try to mimic the original singer with the 'dou ying', but nothing wrong with that. If you wanna nail this song, there has to be 'dou ying' throughout not just the first verse. if not you just have to sing without it. Not with it starting , then without it after the first chorus.I just feel that its important to have your own character when singing.

Just my opinion, no hard feelings

 

[jh85]

you actually point out the flaws of this song i sing... when i hear this song i sing the 2nd time... i also find it boring at the chorus part... i will improve on it... will upload new songs soon...

 

[jerek85]

haiyah...no more....i wanna hear also....sounds like it would have been nice from all the comments

 

[jh85]

haiyah...no more....i wanna hear also....sounds like it would have been nice from all the comments

i saw your youtube video on xing bu liao qing... you have good voice... but maybe you are not very familiar with chinese way of singing... tt's why it sound very stiff... hope to hear more from you... you from singapore?