OM: TravIsLame

[dark_knight]

Well its something simple i came up with a couple of weeks ago..the tune..
and was just playing along to a fren when she asked me to record it down and try to make a chorus part to go along..so i did...its not the real deal cus i dunno what the full piece is gonna be like..but im just lookin for any comments regarding it..

im also lookin to puttin in some drumbeats, and bass layers..any idea how i can do this? Im using Audacity to record as well and used it to do both the effects (startin of the chorus part and the outro roar thingy)

setup is, Warlock -> MT-2 -> Comp...so forgive the harsh tone.

All comments and help provided is much appreciated. Thanks :twisted:


http://s28.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=1WSKSWHTPMJD53993B0PQXH9DL

 

[echoist]

heya! dun worry abt the tone now yet, after the drums and bass are in, then u will know. it would probably sound diffrent with all the instruments. i love the fact that u do not use the 'overused' metal mid scoop sound. can't wait to hear the finished work! keep it up man...

 

[ItAcHi]

ya...the tone sounds pretty fine to me...and after u add in the bass and drum beats in it the rhythm of it can pretty much change...

 

[beautifulscar]

nice larhs.lol

 

[hifi_killer]

prolly wanna start the riff in clean guitars with loads of chorus to make it creepy..When the drums comes in, turn on the distortion. Dont play it too many times, too much repetition can get very boring.

 

[satch]

dont worry about ur tone so much bro. good job on ur first OM?

 

[dark_knight]

Hungarian Metaller :twisted:

 

[dark_knight]

echoist Thanks for ur comments. Yep ill be adding the drums and bass layers...i got introduced to a software today. So once my comp is fixed gonna get it installed and then start learning how to use it. So will take some time b4 i get it down and hopefully by then a more complete and better version of this piece will be available.

ItAcHi Yeah man, thanks for takin a listen and commenting. Will put up the next version and hope its better hehe..

beautifulscar Thanks for listenin. \m/

hifi_killer 1stly thanks for listenin man. Haha you know my style so well making it creepy and dark. Lol. Ill try out what u have suggested and see how things go. As for repetition, i was just playing without realizing how long i was playing. Stoning from pharmacology ^^

satch Aww man. Thanks alot for taking the trouble to listen bro. Much appreciation for all the nice words and comments.

Thanks to all who downloaded and took a listen. Would be nice to hear your say on it. Dont be shy. You can PM if u wanna. Else its cool too. \m/

 

[pepper-]

It's nice. =) but yeah, think you should cut down on the repetitiveness. Haha. See you around!

 

[dark_knight]

BerkleyInstitute hey man. dont mention it ya. learnt alot from there man. thanks for the time taken to show me around and explain everything. Will take things slow for now...till im better off...but yeah...ill keep making tracks. thanks again bro...do PM me ur email to send me those files from that day

pepper- Hey pepper. thanks for listening. yes sure will be cuttin down on the repetitiveness...kills e whole piece b4 e nicer parts even come in..haha... will be workin on it alot more from next week. thanks again

 

[The-Warlord]

waht software for drums and bass? still trying to find a goof program for this..mainly drums..

 

[sofyan]

eh how come berkeley got an account?? haha cool. anyway, as ive said before. great work man

 

[sofyan]

eh how come berkeley got an account?? haha cool. anyway, as ive said before. great work man

Hey man,

Are you the Sofyan who has been learning guitar from us?

Aha yes, 8) it is I.