OM: Smoke On The Water

[siva]

hi .. its me again ..

would like to hear ur opinion on the smoke on the water solo i covered ..

pardon the crappy rhythm .. the focus for this recording is the solo . THX !!

http://s5.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=18573J5J7D3DU3OQIV7MUT4JGI


plz gimme ur frank opinions !! thx once again

 

[thor666]

the plucking in the verse... shouldn't let ring.

solo: try to bend a bit harder... ur bends not up to pitch... try to sustain ur notes more... and give more silent space when there should be. can listen to the recording again to catch those parts.

overall nice job

 

[siva]

haha.. bends ..

tts wat my bandmate said to .. my bending not hard enough .. k .. will work on this !! thx ! keep the opinions coming in .. help me improve /haha

 

[WiZaRd]

nice job..lyk ur guitar sound..wat are u using?

 

[siva]

my gear :

ibanez grx 40
korg ax1500g
ibanez 10 watt amp

recorded using my muvo slim .haha

 

[spikes]

i feel there is more room for improvement(much more), anyways, keep working on it, rock is a dying genre, and its not easy... keep up the good work!!!