OM sloppy impro

[hay88]

the result of stressful poly...very dirty playing...just tested with an impro haha

http://s14.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=0L68O0HTHP68527K96NCBVVEXK

 

[andrewtheshredder]

nice tapping in the beginning.. perhaps try to make ur tapping more distinct and cleaner?

ur shredding is getting cleaner man.. nice tone. some bends dont quite reach to target note, so perhaps work more on ur bends.

a solid effort for sweeping, but try to take it slowly.. not too many at a time or it kinda sounds a little muddy. ur shredding has improved man.. maybe one suggestion to ur overall playing, is to develop some form of vibrato to make it sound more geniune....


good job man

 

[hay88]

thx for the suggestion man. well i guess the reaons why it sounds cleaner cos i opt out delay and reverb unlike my past recordings. yeah i agree the sweep part...i can't play it

 

[Vaiyen]

too...much...shred...for...me...

but no offence dude, it's just me.
:wink:

as per what andrew said, you could work on bends and vibrato. Very impt in distinguishing a player.
for sweeping, yea, it's the hardest technique IMO to pick up..but keep at it. Once you nail it, you'll have it for life. And it's frikking cool!

You've got good potential!

 

[penguin]

surprise surprise a kiko loureiro song..

hey man wat u trying to achieve here ..
start slow man...sorry but i feel the notes are all over the place..

 

[NoMiS]

bro... all u need to do now is.. to experiment diff kinda vibratos.. get it steady.. and leave the rest to feel... and u shld be on ur way man,...

 

[The-Warlord]

I wish I could play like that
Only suggestion I would have is to check your tuning..

 

[The-Warlord]

can i ask how you did the drums? : /

 

[hay88]

thx guys for the advice...
warlord:it's a kiko loureiro sogn actually...just happen to find the backing track.
well...i need time to prac man...will attempt this track again when i perfect my techniques