OM: Run & Hide

[ikan]

New song is up for bashing. The song called "Run & Hide" by yours truly:

Run & Hide

Appreciate your feedback especially on the structure, melody and recording quality. Enjoy!

 

[dir]

not a bad song, pretty solid intro but it gets a little predictable afterwards.

The mix sounds pretty rough on the edges, it seems like every instrument was played in a different room. Vocals need to be louder and have more focus, also you can try putting some more work into your overdubs. Guitars could use a little more compression.

Just some comments to get you started, some of them are personal opinions, so don't get too worried. It's a rockin' song.

 

[fibredrive]

first up, the link is wrong. need to add the ".com".

very interesting mix of electronica and rock at the intro. vocals need some work, a little more punch and accent. song wise it's definitely a rocker. nice guitar tone, but guitar work could use a little more variety at the chorus. my 0.2 cents worth. cheers

 

[ikan]

dir: noted on your comments. thanks for checking out man!

fibredrive: i've just edited the link. thanks for the heads up and checking out. comments noted!

 

[ikan]

Anyway guys, new mix is up:

Run & Hide (new mix)

I would like to officially express my utmost gratitude to Justin aka adsr of Jamtank.net for his mastery touch in repairing all my recording flaws, mixing down and mastering the song. I owe you big time man!

 

[dir]

new mix sounds pretty awesome man, kudos to adsr!