OM : Piano Piece

[twoteaspoon]

http://www.yousendit.com/transfer.php?action=download&ufid=E17C48E079438D4B

 

[mingguan]

1. nice work!
2. The sustain pedal seems keep holded throughout. Should improve, will sounds better.
3. The melody line play by right hand seems like not so firm at 1'17"~1'19" (or maybe I listen wrongly?)
4. the block chord at the end sounds wierd to me.

 

[twoteaspoon]

haha thanks. this is my first attempt recording using the piano with no classical training whatsoever. hah. will improve. thanks sounds emo and new age eh? hah

 

[hay88]

nice work kev

 

[Guest]

its soothing..nice for night listening..


dude..i look forward to hearing from you. :wink:

 

[twoteaspoon]

does it sounds new age? like those of kevin kern's ?

 

[cpntq]

nice. some additional comments;

1. timing a bit of off here and there (not smooth)
2. left hand parts need a bit of rework

 

[Guest]

some parts sound a lil sloppy...

but i tink ur ending was too abrupt..

 

[twoteaspoon]

thanks for the feedbacks guys. will continue to improve.

 

[TequilaSunrise]

Not bad, I kind of like it. what's your chord progression btw?