OM: Depression

[LuZeR]

My first time posting a composition of mine here. Comments pls!!!

Thanks

http://s26.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=2M5KD58O2Q9SE393WWRT9OKXYG

 

[teraslasch]

1)You may wana add more instruments o.o.. instead of just playing out from your keyboard...

2)It fits ur title...

3)No dynamics and expresssion, since this is a solo instrument piece, there should be more dynamics,expressions and articulations ^^..

just my 2 cents 8)

 

[soft]

might be an introduction to a very heavy beat piece.

add some horses running/neigh sound efx at the end of this intro. then start some heavy big drum beats like those Chinese Lion Dance style for 8 bars. full orchestra come in full at start of melody.

build up for a while and silence. have a solo male sorpano doing chant like. music pick up when male solo hit trance height. switch from ethnic music style to heavy rock. change vocal.

solo guitar interchange with percussion. basic -> complicated -> unison. end with a bang.

 

[LuZeR]

yea man mr.soft.....that hit the spot right there....exactly what i had in mind in terms of the whole composition but not sure if i can get a male soprano tho lol

teraslasch - thanks for the comment, wil definitely work on it.

Anyone else??