OM: DarknessFury

[DarknessFury]

http://purevolume.com/bendf

It isn't amazing at all...but just wanted comments from pros to a newbie...

 

[strats]

out of all the three i would say i like the second one best. the first one the tone wasn't really there. a little muddy. intro was too long, palying the same thing over and over again. there was some clipping here and there. i like the second one cause it sounds like it can be turned into a backing track

 

[DarknessFury]

Yea, I agree on the first one...so I'm gonna take it out...what's a backing track anyway?

 

[strats]

a backing track is usually a song compostion whereby people can jam to. say fade to black but with the lead parts taken out. so people can jam without hassle.

 

[DarknessFury]

Hihi...updated with tracks better suited for hearing
http://purevolume.com/bendf

Comments, =D

 

[psionic]

-.- u should still be shocked

 

[DarknessFury]

That bad? =(

 

[nitrovo]

i noticed your hand got tired? Some bits were slower than others when playing the same note.

i'll keep listening

edit:

kk you need alot more work. It's just ppwerchords. practise your speed and consistency. keep these recordings and in a cuple of months, listen and see how much you have improved. its a geat feeling

 

[DarknessFury]

Hmm, okie...thanks nitrovo...

 

[sofyan]

with a bit more practice u shld be ready to gig. practice with a metronome ah.

 

[DarknessFury]

Metronome? Those swinging thing?

 

[daryl]

haha yeah something that keeps time! google metronome you should be able to download one online. try "weird metronome".