New Songs

[gryphon]

Hi guys and gals,

Just started writing songs 4 months ago. Its chinese christian songs. Do give some comments on my songs

Jon

http://www.myspace.com/gryphon1972

 

[gryphon]

Any one?

 

[bboy2388]

hey actually it sounds pretty good and the chord changes are quite nice. Since i can't really speak chinese very well i won't comment on the lyrics but it sounds good to my ears. It's a keyboard right? I'm sure it'll sound great with a real piano and maybe some drums and bass later on in the tracks.

 

[gryphon]

Thanks..

Its interesting, our music is so different. Yet there seems to be some things to encourage about...

Will try to add drums and bass later....