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I have just written a new song (sing by english and vietnamese). Please comment. I had the theme song.

SING FOR MY HONEY GIRL
After day, when you went away.
The autumn to become destitute.
And the hill where we met together...
And the day, when you went uncertain....
I still wait you with that old tower, in orther to give you lovesick i have
Everynight, i call you in the wind. And next morning, my suol cry loudly
I still wait you on that hill we met... near tower we lover
Cry alone with death soul of mine
Missing you i know that is love
Which time is truth in this life?
Anything is truth in my life?
And my prime have not sweet dream
why i cry? by miss my dream girl
Sing for my girl. sing for my girl, my honey girl.......
I have just written a new song (sing by english and vietnamese). Please comment. I had the theme song.

SING FOR MY HONEY GIRL
After day, when you went away.
The autumn to become destitute.
And the hill where we met together...
And the day, when you went uncertain....
I still wait you with that old tower, in orther to give you lovesick i have
Everynight, i call you in the wind. And next morning, my suol cry loudly
I still wait you on that hill we met... near tower we lover
Cry alone with death soul of mine
Missing you i know that is love
Which time is truth in this life?
Anything is truth in my life?
And my prime have not sweet dream
why i cry? by miss my dream girl
Sing for my girl. sing for my girl, my honey girl.......