My humble originals, pls advise :D

[oto]

Hi Mr Soft, hi guys!
This is my 1st post, although I have been browsing SOFT for quite sometime already. I guess, I am ready to share some of my songs here.
I am new to composing, and I am using a Korg PA50 at my work place and a MDR4 to record. I knew SOFT have lots of professional musicians here, so pls help me improve by giving some feed backs. Really really appreciate it.

Far Far Away (me trying to be a pianist)

Pride (me trying to be chinese ochestra lol)

Fly Like An Angel (me trying to be englishy this time, imagine slow-mo flying? lol)

Inside (me trying to be scary, maybe its too repetitive, maybe a few bars shorter will be nice... lol, anyway, might work for a background horror scene)

Imperial Cow (ok pls don't laugh, lol, its for a colleague of mine for her little project. its suppose to be a imperial cow bathing, before being milk! lol)

Spiral, Never Ending (this is influenced by J-POP fusion? something like those of utada hikaru, but i know, i am way far behind. and poor me dun know how to sequence the drum, so i end up punching them the whole song . this song is still unfinish tho)

Princess' Dream (omg, i am trying to be canto pop now. its also unfinish tho and very very draft, until more ideas pop in )

Well, phew. Glad I post this out. If the method I use to post is not right, pls inform me. I will try to change it.

Thanks in advance guys!

 

[BIONICWOMAN]

Oto's Originals

Hi Oto,

I personally feel that a musician/songwriter creates music not to please others...we are not born into this world as people pleasers. That for me is maturity.

All musicians/artistes will attract their own niche following. They never choose to be someone they ain't or emulate another musician/artiste too much. Create your own identity...which you are comfortable under your own skin...and nobody can take it away from you.

You did very well for all the tracks...and along with the synopsis to each song. Wow!

Cheers! To Your Original Compositions Oto

 

[oto]

Thanks BIONICWOMAN! Its my first reply!! Wohoo! lol. I totally agree with the own identity thing! But I think I have none at the moment! lol. Will keep on searching! Glad you survived after hearing my songs lol. Thanks a lot. Means a lot to me.

P.S. I never tot the first comment was from somebody as professional as you! OMG! Man, I feel so small now. Blush blush

 

[lavivacampeon]

Hey OTO,

U really have some compositions there. Well done.

Cheers

 

[YSR]

thats the spirit man, writing originals keep it up dude