My friend's composition and we got together to play it..

[5stringedsoul]

http://beta.yousendit.com/transfer.php?action=download&ufid=4AE3B19F0D470FE9



tell me your comments yea! appreciate it lots..

 

[Guest]

who's singing? voice sounds nice but at the chorus it seems like a mess

but still good stuff

 

[5stringedsoul]

thx man, all of us agree on rearranging and recording the song one more time..

we were rushing to do it cuz it was my friend's composition assignment, it all started with that guitar riff..

thx chester

does anyone else have anything to comment?

 

[Mobius]

The vocals are for the verse and chorus sound the same, maybe can try shouting durin the chorus to bring out the "force" of it? the chorus abit messy.The solo mayb can shorten it? cos towards the end it sounds abit like noodling and doesnt really lift up the song for the chorus. Overall quite good lah