How to improve?

[Ardentash]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UnVcqdIktFA

This is me using my extra thumb to pluck the strings.. My voice still not good yet and my guitar skills.

Just wanna share with you guys..

how to improve ah?And what are my problems?

thanks =)

 

[bf0502tr]

dood u got the same extra thumb someone from my camp last time has!! nice to see u still able to play so fluently. while i aint a chinese pop fan, here are my humble observations and opinions: at some parts just after the middle u started to stumble and ur hands couldnt keep up with ur singing. not sure if the song was like that but it sounded out of sync to me(the bass notes didnt come in on the beat). do try to practice that part some more till u can play and sing at the same time (but if the song was like that then pardon me ) other than that, i think ur voice was pretty good, fit the song and the rest of ur playing was nice. keep practicing and u'll get where u want to be

 

[Ardentash]

hey can i ask.. ur friend what pes ah?

 

[ashes307]

Don't worry, you're not bad but try not to look at your guitar so often. It kinda spoils the mood.

 

[bf0502tr]

hey can i ask.. ur friend what pes ah?

c something lol...he ord alr

 

[relinquish69]

Guitar wise maybe slow down the pace and soften the plucking because the focus is more on the singing. Singing wise, use more diaphragm, less nose . keep practicing and you will get better naturally.

once you have reached that level, maybe add some fancy chords in there. Good job!