Have a listen to my band's track

[Happybutt]

hey guys!! pls take sometime and have a listen to my band's recorded track!comment on it, we really need ur comments!any comments will be appreciated, jus throw it out!we're pretty thick-skinned.so dun worry. the track is only roughly mixed and not yet mastered. recording, mixing is done by us in a sch's studio with some help from the kind studio guys. like the page if u like the song Thank you!

http://www.facebook.com/#!/pages/Beth/188632407814295

 

[JunAD]

Not bad, considering its done in a school's studio.
But the rhythm guitar effects can use a little more punch IMO.

 

[Happybutt]

hey guys this is the same demo track, jus that its not on facebook.for those who dun have facebook. Pls comment people we really them so we can further improve our sound, like the FB page too!
Thank you!
http://soundcloud.com/happybutt/this-war-demo