not bad! an overall good attempt. i'd suggest practicing more on your vibratos and phrasing. you do speedy stuff really well but in a funk fusion context we go more for a steady 16th note runs instead of just blasting in full speed. it shows more detail and sounds more interesting that way. think guthrie govan, tom quayle and other fusion masters.
notes choices wise, i notice u were trying some chromatic passing tones and were also trying to 'throw the key off' by playing off key which are good attempts to play over a fusion track BUT, there are instances where u landed on the wrong notes O_O it's ok to play 'wrong' notes when u do ur 16th runs or shred but it's crucial to land on the right note.
bending, well, in a fusion context, bends are 'not that' commonly used. u spammed too much bends here making it sound like a typical metal or blues guy trying to 'get over it' with the bends [or trying very hard to play over the track]. ya we know bendings are important for expressions but here, it's extra
trying replacing some of those bends with slides instead.
