chinese song rendition - comment

[jianrong]

http://media.putfile.com/Mo-Ri-Zhi-Lian-Rendition

張智成 - 末日之恋

詞:張思爾/施人誠 曲:林俊傑 - rendition sing by threadstarter.

剩下没多少时间　让我再唱一首歌　给你　
一过了今夜　世界就毁灭
我想我还有一天　可以学会如何来　爱你
在来不及以前　渴望来得及

闭上眼睛　忍住泪　别哭泣
末日前夕　请留在　我怀里
看　太阳暗去　月光失明
我只想牵你的指尖　绕地球最后一圈

黑夜降临　别害怕　我爱你
末日前夕　请留在　我怀里
我　在这世界最眷恋的事情
就是曾拥抱你 - (多想永远拥抱你) - ending

感受到什么在剧烈颤抖　是天空或者你的手
别让任何事情打断我看着你　最后一次看着你

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using a cheap headphone mic plus audition software...

Original vocal was way too loud...After some mixing...It came out as above. Dictions was still bad...Chinese not good enough.

:nervous

 

[zilchster81]

Pao3 Yin1

A lot of notes are flat...flat...flat...gao yin also flat...

Yao3 Zi4 needs a lot of improvement

Rhythm also not too good when it comes to the bridge.

Ji Xu Jia You/