Chinese Progressive Original - 完美&

[EvilGtr]

hehee this original was completed by Breed and myself somewhat like a month ago.... it's my first chinese original, and i believe it's theBreed's first too so tell us your comments. Din wan to post this at first cos my vocals are too sucky and wanted to redo.... but then i realised that the vocals are still sucky no matter how i try lol, wanted andrew to do it for me... but he'd wanted to do it in english instead :? Leave comments pls kekee

http://www.savefile.com/files/1303220

Song Structure: Breed + Evil
Lyrics: Evil
Lead & Rhythm Guit: Breed
A little Rhythm: Evil
Vox: Evil .... sigh
Drums & Bass: Evil programming
Keys Solo & Orchestra: Evil


完美人生

走进人群鞑入社会
早已了解事态变幻
还有世界对我的期盼
寻找金钱争取地位
每天一样无新鲜感
但反叛逆流我哪里敢
是否一一彻底破碎
童年每一个梦想
锁在这空间无法飞翔
只好跟着大家寻找
所谓完美的人生
完美但上了锁的一生

身边伊人不停更换
无一知心相伴
日起日落为这生活
朝着完美驰向
周围近人也无赦免
摆脱人生完美
看清楚点现在的我
唯有期待沉睡

完美一生
唯有
完美人生
等着我
一生郁闷
我有
完美人生
完完美美过一生

 

[Vaiyen]

very honest lyrics..
nice music too, like the odd-time riff especially!

 

[EvilGtr]

thanks! lol u saved the day.... you're the first and only one who replied! hahahahhahaha

 

[blahblah]

i "tia boh" half of it but music not bad lol.

 

[unwell14]

Ahahaha I was wondering why vocals: Evil. Thought i listen to some evil song ><

ohmydaughter I am so DENSE -.-

hey nice hm unique sound for chinese song! (or maybe i'm just like swaku) i like the sound from 2:11- 2:40

 

[EvilGtr]

i "tia boh" half of it but music not bad lol.

lol tia boh as in mixing no good or that u dun understand cheena?

 

[EvilGtr]

Ahahaha I was wondering why vocals: Evil. Thought i listen to some evil song ><

ohmydaughter I am so DENSE -.-

hey nice hm unique sound for chinese song! (or maybe i'm just like swaku) i like the sound from 2:11- 2:40

hehe Evil = me

SOund from 2:11- 2:40 ? Keyboards or the riff?

Thanks for listening

 

[blahblah]

i "tia boh" half of it but music not bad lol.

lol tia boh as in mixing no good or that u dun understand cheena?

my current chinese standard is f9. :lol:

 

[TheBreed]

ha, i tot we not uploading this until the vox is done?! anywayz, hope u guys like this 1st original... :lol: :lol:

 

[lalala]

u guys in a band or something?
hope to hear more from u guys :lol:

 

[EvilGtr]

lol thanks.... actually breed and I are sort of a "home project" band hehe, he responded to my ad at

http://www.soft.com.sg/new/modules.php?name=Forums&file=viewtopic&t=6886

and we started working together and this is our first piece kekee

 

[teraslasch]

honestly, i don like it. :?

 

[psionic]

woa the vocals sound like old school channel8 drama theme song

 

[purplehaze3691]

Very nice, just like wu bai meets steve vai, you guys should write more of this stuffs , bring the chinese rock music up on par with the english rock scene

cheers
purplehaze3691

 

[neuro182]

Hee

Well done EvilGtr, hope to hear more of the demos that u & Breed make.

*Puts on the heads & plug into [SHIN - Li Ge]*

Btw, do you guys dig Beyond, FIR, MayDay & the likes?

 

[EvilGtr]

honestly, i don like it. :?

sorry abt that

 

[EvilGtr]

woa the vocals sound like old school channel8 drama theme song

lol i understand i know its bad but thanks for tuning in anyway

 

[EvilGtr]

Very nice, just like wu bai meets steve vai, you guys should write more of this stuffs , bring the chinese rock music up on par with the english rock scene

cheers
purplehaze3691

thanks :wink:

 

[EvilGtr]

Re: Hee

Well done EvilGtr, hope to hear more of the demos that u & Breed make.

*Puts on the heads & plug into [SHIN - Li Ge]*

Btw, do you guys dig Beyond, FIR, MayDay & the likes?

actually.... i dun listen to chinese rock at all.... i believe thats the case for Breed too eheh.... just decided to make this chinese becos I think i've never heard chinese songs done this way before so.... :roll:

 

[neuro182]

Hmm

Oic . . . Nice tho . . .