Azn Pride - feat. Chemain, Ca$h and Jay Canto
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Giantballz
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wut wut!
AgingYouth
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Strangely, the irony of touting Asian pride using the slang, lingo and street language of urban African Americans and their form of music hits me like a freight train...
And more work needs to be done on the production. The outro is too boring.
And more work needs to be done on the production. The outro is too boring.
disclaimer: I know zilch abt rapping.
But to me the whole track is very monotonous. There wasn't any "groove" in the rapping in my opinion. I read the lyrics first, and i felt yea it's pretty innovative. But the entire track lacks the punch tt i tot the lyrics would give.
1st singer was like trying very hard to fit into the beat. 2nd singer started off well, but drifted in tempo and went off too. I couldn't finish listening so yea no comments for the 3rd singer.
Mixing wise, it still sounds very raw. Unpolished. Sounds like a Mrbrown show with a hint of backgrd hip hop track. Yup.
Overall the song lacks identity, like just 3 dudes in a freestylin competition.
Jin is still better ^^. At least he's angrier.
Hope my criticisms are constructive for u guys.
And agingyouth, yea what an irony.
But to me the whole track is very monotonous. There wasn't any "groove" in the rapping in my opinion. I read the lyrics first, and i felt yea it's pretty innovative. But the entire track lacks the punch tt i tot the lyrics would give.
1st singer was like trying very hard to fit into the beat. 2nd singer started off well, but drifted in tempo and went off too. I couldn't finish listening so yea no comments for the 3rd singer.
Mixing wise, it still sounds very raw. Unpolished. Sounds like a Mrbrown show with a hint of backgrd hip hop track. Yup.
Overall the song lacks identity, like just 3 dudes in a freestylin competition.
Jin is still better ^^. At least he's angrier.
Hope my criticisms are constructive for u guys.
And agingyouth, yea what an irony.