Attempting Tender Surrender..

[Shredaholic]

Hey fellow softies! Trying to learn Steve Vai's Tender Surrender now.. Finished with the clean part. If you have time just download the clip below and your advice on how i should improve would be greatly appreciated! Just wanna know if i m playing it the correct way and such. Thx! =)


http://download.yousendit.com/22EDEF883C37A41D