Alanis Mmmmmm

[syltramon]

Hello! For my Alanis Morissette covers & Aurigami's Originals please visit

www.youtube.com/syltramon

rembr to leave comments and rate!


SYL
you live you learn!

 

[wyldeboon]

eh? very familiar leh u

 

[sage]

Nice~ Pretty unique vocal style over there, very alanis-y, and lovely tone.

 

[Thubtenkway]

Good vocal direction you are heading to.
Have you tried composing?

 

[spinninsticks]

Good vocal direction you are heading to.
Have you tried composing?

Hey bro, She do have some original compositions on her youtube page. I'm a subscriber!

Boon why you havent subscribe!

 

[wyldeboon]

i no nid to subcribe la... syltamon is my bestfrd in the whole universe,so i can use hers...

sage - she is unique... and so are u!

 

[Thubtenkway]

Hey bro, She do have some original compositions on her youtube page. I'm a subscriber!

Boon why you havent subscribe!

Thank Bro, was too much in a hurry again.

OK Syltramon, about the originals, Hooks are very important in a song that is to appeal. Try to get some Hooks into your compositions.
The guitar accompanying your singing sounds almost the same in each song. I suspect you have limitation there. Try experimenting with different rhythms, maybe learn some open-tunings, etc. etc.

Like I said I like the vocal direction. Text is always difficult and some part of 'What is it?' becomes unclear though it started off well. Maybe I'm too dumb.

I'm very critical about my own text too. Text is your music genre is very important and needs careful scrutiny.

 

[sage]

Am agreeing with Thubtenkway on the text aspect; you've got lovely lyrics, and it'll be a pity if they're not heard, although I kinda suspect it's due to your vocal style. Maybe a good balance would be nice?

And I'm fronting the fella who posted on your page requesting "Not the Doctor"

sage - she is unique... and so are u!

And you! And.. and.. everyone... else too...

 

[fgl]

great up ur points!